My only thought is that Linnea hasn't been defined in the early parts of the plan - she is only mentioned by name. In the post-delivery you mention 'Older daughter'.
It may well be worth making the link between the two more explicit - especially if this is to be given to strangers for their records in advance.
I think it's pretty much exactly right. Well done for getting it written.
Once my birth plan had been read and signed by the relevant parties, I found it relatively easy to stand my ground (over the isotonic drinks thing, I mean), because in my head, the question had already been settled.
(Is there an 'of' missing in the clause about "siting IV drips", or is "siting" adjectival here?)
I only got as far as the General section, then realised I couldn't possibly read the rest of it - but I feel the tone you set in the part I read is appropriate. You seem to be making it clear what you require and why, in a polite but firm manner.
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Date: 2006-05-31 05:03 pm (UTC)Well done at getting this done !
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Date: 2006-05-31 05:11 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-05-31 05:45 pm (UTC)It may well be worth making the link between the two more explicit - especially if this is to be given to strangers for their records in advance.
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Date: 2006-05-31 06:21 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-05-31 06:50 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-06-01 09:36 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-06-01 06:37 pm (UTC)Once my birth plan had been read and signed by the relevant parties, I found it relatively easy to stand my ground (over the isotonic drinks thing, I mean), because in my head, the question had already been settled.
(Is there an 'of' missing in the clause about "siting IV drips", or is "siting" adjectival here?)
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Date: 2006-06-01 09:04 pm (UTC)Good luck. I'm sorry I can't help more :/
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Date: 2006-06-01 09:12 pm (UTC)