Vive la, um, autre meme

[ailbhe]

continent of blood
complete with fjords and headlands
spreads over my thighs

ocean of mucus
complete with shoals of creatures
takes over my throat

other people's meme
spurs new creativity
in boring journals

this could get old fast
but I'm getting old fast, and
anyway, I'm ill.

Comments

[gothwalk.livejournal.com]

As haikus go, they're... unusual. But good.

[ailbhe]

Good? as in not cringemakingly awful, perhaps. But they're not unusual - have a gawp at my friends page.

[hitchhiker.livejournal.com]

this could get old fast
but I'm getting old fast

Love that :)