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ailbhe ([personal profile] ailbhe) wrote2005-11-23 10:50 pm
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The Laughing Day

The Laughing Day

A long, long time ago, when you were very young
And all the world was unexplored and all our songs unsung
You lay nearby and looked at me - you'd only just begun
The day before had rained so hard. That day you brought the sun.

The day I cried the skies cried too -
The labour ward was grey
And the windows let no daylight in -
That was the crying day.

Your whole, long life ago, you lay and looked at me
And I woke up and your own face was the first thing I could see
And I looked into your blue eyes and saw the love to be
And a nurse came in and drew the blinds and the sun shone in on me.

The day I cried the skies cried too -
The labour ward was grey
And the windows let no daylight in -
That was the crying day.

The short, hard year has passed, and you still wake and play
And the days are long and full of joy and toys in disarray
You run and hide, then come to us, and without words you say
That from your waking to your rest, this is the laughing day.

I wanted to write how I felt and then I realised I'd already done it.

[identity profile] the-warwick.livejournal.com 2005-11-23 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
erm... wow... that's.. wow.

Thank you.

[identity profile] helenprev.livejournal.com 2005-11-23 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful. Thank you. :-)

[identity profile] mobilemum.livejournal.com 2005-11-23 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
That is just beautiful
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[identity profile] supermouse.livejournal.com 2005-11-23 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
That's amazing. Wow. I'm stunned.

[identity profile] caerleon.livejournal.com 2005-11-24 12:14 am (UTC)(link)
That really is beautiful..
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[personal profile] kiya 2005-11-24 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
I got your poems for a mother I know.

[identity profile] cherade9.livejournal.com 2005-11-24 12:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you.. that has expressed how I feel about Adam and his birth much better than I could myself

*hugs*

Liz

[identity profile] sashajwolf.livejournal.com 2005-11-24 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
That brought a tear to my eye.